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Drafting and Revising

Drafting and Revision: The Editing and Rewriting Process

When writing a first draft, it’s important that students write down everything they know about the topic, not worrying about perfection, about paragraph length or a good opening or conclusion. A rough draft is just that: rough. But once students have their ideas on the page, the next step is to look critically at what is written and do some problem solving to decide how to make the rough draft better. After all, that’s what the revision process is about!

The point is not that what is written is bad, but let’s face it, not even professional writers tap out perfectly thought-out prose the first time at the keyboard. So now is the time to for students to read their work like an outside audience and evaluate the work. Revision is RE-VISION. It’s good to let a draft sit for a few days; that way, students can look at their work with a new critical eye, critical for what doesn’t work and what does.

Remember that revision is not proofreading. Revision deals with underlying issues and content while proofreading deals largely with surface details and presentation. Like a funnel, students have to start at “higher order” concerns (how the essay and individual paragraphs hold together) and then move down to “lower order” concerns (sentences, word choice, mechanics).

ASK YOURSELF . . .

  • Does your title give readers a good idea of what’s to come? (Have you even come up with one yet? Remember, “Assignment #3” is not a title!)
  • Is your thesis statement or research question clearly stated?
  • Is there enough lead-in in the introduction to establish the importance of and context for the statement/question? Is there too much? Too little? By the end of the introduction, is it clear to the audience what kind of material will follow? If so, are these expectations fulfilled, that is, do you follow through?
  • Is it clear where your introduction ends and body begins and where the body ends and the conclusion begins? In other words, are your paragraph indents meaningful?
  • At the same time, are there transitions between all sections and paragraphs to create flow and unity?
  • Does each body paragraph have a topic sentence? If you took your thesis/question and all your topic sentences, would that correspond to what you want to say in your paper? If not, do you need to revise your thesis/question or re-examine your subpoints?
  • Do the topic sentences (1) make a connection back with the thesis/question, (2) establish a link with the previous paragraph’s content (perhaps the chronological relationship, any comparisons/contrasts?) and (3) give enough information that the audience could guess where a particular paragraph’s development would lead?
  • With or without a formal concluding sentence, do you somewhere near the end of each paragraph remind readers why you are saying what you are saying by moving back up to abstract, general terms?
  • Does the order of paragraphs make sense? (e.g., maybe the transitions seem forced because they aren’t in the right order)
  • Are your paragraphs too short (say, fewer than four sentences) or too long ( longer than about eight)? Is there some combining or separating of issues that needs to take place? Or do you simply need to generate more content or delete irrelevant material?
  • Are your examples reliable, representative, and convincing? Are there enough of them (or too many) to develop the main idea of the paragraph in the word count you have available?
  • Are your sources convincing? Is there enough balance between your own insights and expert opinions?
  • Is anything that should be referenced, referenced?
  • Are all sources and direct quotations explained or have you left them standing on their own?
  • Has anything that goes off topic or is not essential (given your word limit) been cut? (TIP: whenever you know you have to cut something but you’re finding it hard to do, cut and paste it in a separate file so that you feel it hasn’t been obliterated. In a couple of weeks, you’ll probably go back and wonder why you were so attached to the passage in the first place!)
  • Does the conclusion say something different from your introduction? Does it leave a good lasting impression or is it wishy-washy?

As the folks at Ashland University’s Writing Center put it, there are four basic actions that will occur during the revisions students now hopefully plan to make:

ADD. Insert needed words, sentences, and paragraphs. If additions require new content, return to the idea-gathering techniques.
CUT. Get rid of whatever goes off the topic or repeats what has already been said.
REPLACE. As needed, substitute new words, sentences, and paragraphs for what has been cut.
MOVE. Change the sequence of paragraphs if the material is not presented in logical order. Move sentences.

All of these actions are easily done electronically, but try not to do all your revision on the computer. Alternating between “screen” and “paper” copy is a great way to achieve perspective.

Now what about ‘lower order’ concerns? These issues are highly individualized so look through old marked papers for comments previously received at the level of sentences and word choice. Are there any trends? Bring in a writing sample to a tutor or a peer to look for things done well or things that students seem to have difficulty with. The most common mistakes are a lack of clarity and general wordiness.

Adapted from: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/revise.html

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